Aug 31

In preparation for the upcoming Fire Petal Writing Retreat, we asked a few questions of Lauren MacLeod, literary agent with the Strothman Agency and the retreat’s faculty member.

What is your role in publishing as an agent? Why is that important?
As an agent, I wear many hats but first and foremost my job is to represent the interest of my writers.  Most writers know that agents have connections and relationships that help us sell our client’s work to publishers, but some of the most important things we do happen after a book is sold. We negotiate contracts for our authors and make sure they are getting a fair deal, and we also help our clients sell sub rights (like movies, audio, or translation). As agents, we serve as a go between—we understand the author’s career goals and what he/she wants, but we also understand the publishing business and can step in when there is a disagreement, problem, or misunderstanding.  There are a thousand other things we do (check over and translate royalty statements, keep track of payments etc) but selling the book, negotiating the contract, and handling subsidiary rights are probably the three most important aspects.

What was your favorite book(s) as a child? How has that influenced your work as an agent?
Oh, what a tough question! I had oodles of picture books, but I really loved CLOUDY WITH A CHANCE OF MEATBALLS and ELOISE and I named my very first dog  MADELINE. I read all the series as well: BOXCAR CHILDREN, NANCY DREW, BABYSITTERS CLUB… . But if I had to pick a favorite I’d probably say BUNNICULA. I thought BUNNICULA was hilarious (even when it was scary) and something I’m always on the lookout for today are really well-written, funny books.  When I was a teenager, there weren’t really that many cool books for young adults—once you stopped reading BABYSITTERS CLUB, you basically either stopped reading completely or switched over to adult books. So now when I go through my submissions I’m always on the lookout for books I would have loved to read when I was 16.

With all of the advances and new technologies in publishing, what do you see as the most exciting development in relation to children’s literature?
There are cooler technologies out there, but I think the accessibility of authors via Facebook, Twitter, or even their blogs is awesome—I’d have loved to be able to finish a book and then get online and interact with the author.  In this vein, I think Skype visits are awesome as well. An author can be 2,000 miles away, but teachers  can still have them “visit” the classroom after  their students read the book.

What do you see as the most vital thing writers need to learn about writing?
I wish there were only one vital thing! I think something that kidlit writers need to be especially aware of is pacing and plot. You are writing for readers who have a thousand other ways to distract themselves, so you have to make sure you keep them hooked!

What is the deadliest mistake you see in materials writers submit to you?
I see a lot of crazy word counts (YA novels that are 1,500 words or  300,000 words), which  unfortunatly means a form rejection and could be so easily fixed with a little research.  Make sure you read widely in your genre—know how long most books are, what age the protagonists tend to be (college age, for example, tends to be a really hard sell for YA), and generally how much sex/violence/swearing is acceptable. If you are going to “break the rules,” make sure you are doing so consciously and for a very good reason because it means you have an even harder uphill battle.

If you could share one lesson with every writer in the world, what would it be?
Keep writing! The first thing you should do after you finish reading and revising your first manuscript is to start on a completely new (read that as: not the second book in the series) writing project. Each book you write will teach you something new, and if you stick with it long enough you might just write “the one” that will lead to publication.  Don’t get fooled by all those debut novelists out there—though it might be their first published book, I’d bet most of them have at least an earlier novel or two in a drawer somewhere at home.

If you could be any character (male or female) from children’s literature, who would you be? Why?
Hands down: Hermione Granger. Who wouldn’t want to be best friends with Harry and Ron and be able to do magic (and exceedingly well at that)? Plus she is smart, brave, and she likes to read—the ultimate nerdy girl hero.

Take advantage of Lauren’s expertise by spending 2 evenings with her and a dozen other writers at a cabin near Bear Lake, Utah. To learn more or ask questions, email info @firepetalbooks .com or call 801.992.3776

Lauren E. MacLeod joined the Strothman Agency after graduating cum laude from Emerson College with a BFA in Writing, Literature and Publishing. Lauren’s primary interests are middle grade novels, young adult fiction and nonfiction, as well as highly polished literary fiction and narrative nonfiction. Lauren also works closely with the agency and its clients to create effective digital platforms and capitalize on the many opportunities presented by social networking. Recent sales include: Real Mermaids Don’t Wear Toe Rings by Hélène Boudreau (Sourcebooks/Jabberwocky), and The Newsoul Trilogy by Jodi Meadows (HarperCollins/ Katherine Tegen Books).

Early Bird Pricing
Aug 30
SCUMBLE by Ingrid Law
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ScumbleScumble by Ingrid Law

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

If Ingrid Law’s debut, SAVVY, taught us anything, it’s that this writer is adept at portraying humanity at its most basic level. While I loved SAVVY, I can’t think of an adequate word to describe my adoration for SCUMBLE. Maybe it’s because I live in the Mountain West near Wyoming, but something in the story of young Ledge struck home.

What Law does best in both her books is show an everyman struggling with an extraordinary power and coming out more human than before. I can’t recommend SCUMBLE highly enough. Pay attention to this story, and it will change you. It changed me.

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Aug 20

If you’re a new author, it can be daunting trying to get bookstores to carry your book, especially if you’re self-publishing or working with a small press. While booksellers are excited to meet and speak with local authors, there are some things you can do to make the meeting more beneficial for both of you. And like anything else in life, there are numerous pitfalls to avoid.

Very good

  • You’ve done everything you can to make your book the best possible—and then you hire a professional editor to make it even better. Even if your Aunt Flo taught high school English 10 years ago, she can’t catch all of the mistakes that a trained editor will.
  • Likewise, if you’re paying for your book to be published, hire a professional designer to create the cover. Nothing screams self-published book more than a poorly designed cover. I won’t go into details, because it’s obvious when you see one. Don’t let that be yours.
  • Shop at the store where you’d like your books to sell. Knowing that you patronize their store is an incentive for a bookseller to carry your title. It shows that you’re aware of the store’s importance in the community as well as proving your willingness to be a partner in your book’s sales.

Good

  • Schedule a time before stopping by the store to make sure the buyer is available, either by phone or email.
  • Introduce yourself and then ask a bit about the store or mentioning how much you like to shop there—if it’s true. Act like a human being, because real people are much easier to like than sales pitches.
  • Be polite and act as though it’s a business matter—because it is!

Not so good

  • Being enthusiastic about your book is great, but being too enthusiastic is, well, too much. We know you’re excited about it, so there’s no need to prove it.
  • A bookseller can tell if a book is self-published—even if you create a company to make it look like it’s not self-published. Don’t try to hide it. We know.
  • Making demands? Not so good. Telling people how it will be? Really not good. If you give a bookseller an ultimatum about carrying your book . . . he’ll say no. Guaranteed. Instead, offer and negotiate. Be willing to adjust your expectations because you approached him. It’s very easy for him to tell you to scram, and I don’t know that he’ll feel bad about it either.

Bad

  • Sending an email with an attached press release but no personalization to the seller or store. You haven’t included anything to make us want to carry your book. It’s like spam, really, and no one likes spam—unless you’re a Viking.*
  • Taking more than five to ten minutes of a bookseller’s time, especially if you’re talking about your book for the entire time, is much too much. Offer a short introduction of yourself and your book, then hand over a copy so they can see for themselves if it’s something they’d want to carry.
  • If you’re asking us to sell your book at the store, then telling everyone you know to buy it from you at a large discount . . . well, I hope you realize why that is a BAD IDEA. The bookstore won’t sell your books if you’re taking away all of their potential customers.
  • It’s usually not a good idea to name drop, especially if that person’s never heard of you before. Given that booksellers make it their business to know everyone with any connection to literature in their area, chances are they have Famous Author’s number on speed dial. You’d better believe that the minute you leave the store, they’ll be chatting with their good friend the Famous Author. So be careful with exaggerations.

Very bad

  • Hijacking visiting authors. Published authors doing events at the store are not your ticket to the big time, nor is it appropriate to ask them to read your book. This is to commemorate their book, not yours.
  • Just as bad, selling your book to customers without permission. This includes sneaking into the store to approach customers; talking to customers after the store has declined to stock your book; placing bookmarks and other promotional materials around the store, etc. I think you get the idea.
  • And just as just as bad, if the bookseller is willing to sell your book, don’t make displays of your books wherever you feel like. Don’t place them in prominent places hoping the bookseller won’t notice. We will. And we’ll change it back. And don’t move other books out of the way to make a place for yours. For one, it’s rude. And two, we don’t like people who make our jobs harder.
  • Never ever ever ever get upset or yell at the bookseller if they decide not to carry your book. Getting mad at them will not entice them to reconsider. It’ll just make us hate you. Honest. We talk to one another. And tell horror stories. Don’t think it won’t get around.
  • And finally, NEVER trash talk or say mean things about the bookstore, its employees, the store cat, etc. Even if they decide not to carry this book, it’s best not to burn bridges for when your next book comes out. Booksellers have looooong memories. Don’t test it.
  • Actually, don’t say mean things about anyone. People will like you more, and you’ll be less likely to have a heart attack.

*Monty Python reference. Don’t blame me if you haven’t watched one of the funniest Python skits ever. YouTube. Use it.

Aug 19
In honor of MOCKINGJAY…
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Think Old Spice man when you read:

Hello, ladies. Look at your Peeta – now back to me – now back at your Peeta – now back to me. Sadly, he isn’t me, but if he stopped painting fruity little cupcakes and switched to hunting and providing for his family, he could smell like he’s me (coal dust, spice, and everything nice). Look down. Back up, where are you? You’re in the woods with the man your man could hunt like. What’s in your hand? Back at me. I have it! It’s a silver parachute with that lamb and plum stew you love. Look again, the stew is now that sexy, smoldering look I keep giving you while you [mess] around with Peeta. Anything is possible when your man is a lithe, [sexy] hunter and not decorating pastries like a lady. I’m on a horse.

Stolen er, “borrowed” from Amanda, originally posted as a comment to the Hunger Games Drinking Game over at the Forever Young Adult blog. The drinking game post is rather funny as well—but only if you’re over 21.

Aug 17
Sad news
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Saturday night, I (Michelle) noticed that one of our little guinea pigs, Puck, was walking weird. When I took him out of the cage and put him on the floor, he ran off, dragging his hind legs on the ground. The next morning I took him to the pet ER, and I’m very sad to say that Puck was so sick we had to put him to sleep. He had a really bad infection, though they’re not sure why he was paralyzed.

Puck, left, and Pan, right

Since Puck is no longer here, Pan is very sad. (You can tell if a guinea pig is happy because he jumps, called popcorning. Pan popcorned all morning before I took Puck the vet, but hasn’t done it at all since.)

We’ve decided to find a good family for Pan since we can’t give him the emotional care he needs. They need to be in the company of other guinea pigs, and it takes time to adjust them to a new pig. It would be too much work, especially at the store with people coming in all day long.

If you or someone you know has guinea pigs, is familiar with their care, and would be interested in adopting Pan, please call 801.992.3776. We’re diligently looking for the best fit for Pan. We want what’s best for him, though it will break our hearts to see both of them go, albeit in different ways.

Aug 12

The past few weeks—months, really—have been so insanely busy that I haven’t taken the time to share my heartfelt thanks with you. So I’d like to take a (sentimental) moment now to express a small portion of my gratitude with you. The whole of it is too large to put into a few hundred words, so a bit of it will have to suffice.

You may well remember me as the crazy woman who said she was going to open a bookstore, even though she didn’t have money or business experience. (Well, maybe it was just the bankers who thought that.) I came to you, asking for your help to build a place where kids and teens could meet, read books, and discuss all-important matters like the opposite sex or how to build a time machine.

I once heard a young boy ask the wonderful booksellers at the King’s English where he would find a book on how to build a time machine. Their discussion with him on which section it might be in showed me what it truly meant to be a children’s bookseller. Nothing is beyond belief, and everything is important. Especially to a child.

That’s one thing I’ve learned from associating with the children’s literature community. Everything is important. Every emotion and love and fear is real and it is valuable. Children have the amazing ability to delight in life, and especially in each moment. I forgot that for a while, but I’m hoping the children and teens coming into Fire Petal will help me regain what I’ve lost.

I’ve also learned that kindness and love are freely given by children—and those who devote their lives to them. The outpouring of support I’ve received over the past six months continues to astound me. Because of generous donations from authors, agents, and editors, as well as willing bidders from across the country, we raised $5,000 to jumpstart the store.

While it didn’t cover the cost of everything the store would need, it gave us a fighting chance. In one dark moment just weeks shy of the opening, I didn’t know if I would make it, if the store would make it. I was so afraid that the whole house would soon crumble around me. But in that moment, I remembered the numerous individuals who had said my success was an inspiration to them. That what I was doing in following my dreams encouraged them to follow their own. Then I knew I couldn’t give in to my fear because I couldn’t let them down. I truly believe that one person’s success breeds success for others, and I didn’t want anyone to surrender their own dream because mine had failed. I needed to prove that it is possible for one woman to build something spectacular with the help of a community.

I don’t write this note from the perspective of someone who has succeeded in all her goals. There is still so much to be done and a lot of difficulty ahead. But I want to thank each of you for pushing me forward when it would have been so much easier for me to quit. And I hope to remind you that nothing is impossible if you’re willing to fight for it. Besides, we have to prove to these kids and teens that one person can change the world, even if that world is only as big as their backyard.

It is my hope that you’ll be a hero to a child—or to an adult struggling to find his way. You don’t have to feel like a hero; what matters is that you are doing everything humanly possible to achieve your dreams and grow happiness in your world. They see that, and they know that if it’s possible for you, it’s possible for them, too.

Most of all, though, I want this little store to be a living example of what happens when community surrounds and strengthens one of its members. Miracles happen. A miracle has happened in my life, and I owe it to you. So I thank you and ask that you come to Fire Petal Books some day so I can show you what you’ve helped create.

Aug 9

Well, sort of. Okay, not really. But it’s still fun to have someone write about you in the newspaper.

Click here to see the Deseret Morning News article online. Or if you’re in Utah, pick up Tuesday’s copy. We’re on the cover of the Life section.

P.S. You should tell all your family and friends about us, because we’re famous!

Aug 6

The Rules:

  • Show us some sort of proof (like tweets, blog posts, letters to your pen pal, tattoos, etc.) and you’re entered in the drawing
  • We’ll draw the winner on Monday at 7:30 pm
  • To make it more fun (because I like meeting new people), if you physically come into the store you get entered twice! (Once for spreading the word, and another for coming in. See how well that works?)

The Prize:

  • Un-Required Reading water bottle
  • 13 Words buttons
  • Dead is the New Black advance reading copy
  • bookmarks galore
  • Snoopy cell phone charm
  • Play-Dough
  • and I think I’ll add an ARC of Torment by Lauren Kate
  • but maybe I should include The Mockingbirds by Daisy Whitney instead
  • oh, I can’t decide
  • heck, I’ll throw them both in . . .
  • . . . to a marvelous inkpop tote bag from HarperCollins!
Aug 5
Winners!
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Fairytale Prize Pack goes to: AMMON EVANS Yay!

Aug 4

Today’s Giveaway:

Knuffle Bunny Pack

  • Knuffle Bunny Free by Mo Willems poster (signed by author/illustrator) and advance reader copy
  • Roar dinosaur door sign and bookmark
  • Bookmarks

    At Fire Petal Books, we like to give away free stuff. We’re just nice like that. So for the next two weeks, we’re giving away 15 prize packs full of fabulous book swag.

    Here’s how you enter: Stop by Fire Petal Books, where you’ll be given a raffle ticket for you to write your name and phone number (or other contact info, like an email address) on it. Then stick it in one of the Prize Piggie (banks). At 7:30 pm each day we’ll draw a winner from all of that day’s entrants.

    The cool part? You can enter every day, and this is going on for a full 2 weeks. But you must stop by to put your daily entry in the piggie. You don’t need to be present when the winner is drawn, which is why we’ll need your contact info. Only one person per family can win through the entire contest, though every member of the family can enter until one of them wins.

    Below is the calendar of when each prize pack is given away. That way you can make sure to enter on the days with the stuff you want to win.

    Mystery Pack

    • Fancy Nancy Stickers
    • Bookmark
    • Sally Lockheart Mystery: the Ruby in the Smoke advance reading copy
    • Snack, Nap, Read mini folder
    • Charlie Brown stamp character
    • Play-Dough
    • Pair of book posters

    Romance Pack

    • Team Rochester bag
    • Team Heathcliff shirt
    • Key necklace
    • Sense and Sensibility comic (signed by adapter)
    • Shade advance reading copy
    • Bookmarks
    • Play-Dough
    • Eat, Sleep, Read mini folder

    Princess Pack

    • Beautiful Oops poster
    • The Revolution of Sabine advance reading copy
    • Play-Dough
    • Glass slipper
    • Charlie Brown character stamp
    • Temporary tattoo
    • Bookmarks

    Paranormal Pack

    • Siren advance reading copy
    • The Saga of Larten Crepsley: Birth of a Killer, Cirque du Freak prequel
    • Play-Dough
    • Charlie Brown character stamp
    • Bookmarks
    • Buttons

    All Grown Up pack

    • Mr. Toppit advance reading copy
    • Mr. Toppit umbrella
    • Indignation by Phillip Roth
    • Poster
    • Bookmark
    • Sticky notes

    Kids Fun pack

    • Origami book
    • Horrible Henry poster
    • Sir Seth Thistlethwaite advance reader copy
    • Fancy Nancy stickers
    • Bookmarks
    • Mini puzzle
    • Judy Moody detective notebook

    Nature pack

    • Dinosaur Sticker Atlas
    • Potato chip experiment pack
    • National Geographic pencil
    • Play-Dough
    • Bookmark
    • Wolves, Boys, and Other Things that Might Kill Me by Kristen Chandler advance reader copy (who will be in the store signing that day)

    Artist Pack

    • Dave the Potter picture book galley
    • Bookmark
    • Play-Dough
    • 5 Getting to know Composers books

    Diversity Pack:

    • Pair of posters
    • Bookmarks
    • Home is Where Our Family Is advance reader copy
    • Snoopy character stamp
    • Fancy Nancy stickers
    • Zora and Me advance reader copy

    Indies Pack

    • Saint Training advance reader copy
    • Package of buttons
    • King’s English bag
    • Chinglish bag
    • The Littlest Pumpkin picture book
    • Gibbs Smith frisbee
    • We give books button

    Adventure pack

    • Far World by J. Scott Savage poster (signed by author) and book
    • G-man comic
    • Bookmarks
    • Kane Chronicles character card set
    • Late for School lunch bag
    • Play-Dough

    Green Pack

    • Green Princess Cookbook
    • Citizen Kid poster
    • How to Grow Up and Rule the World by Vordak advance reader copy
    • Bookmark
    • 400 Reusable Stickers book

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